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I find that I have no real emotions-
there is only lust.
I don't know what to make of this,
but I suppose these words will do for now.
there is only lust.
I don't know what to make of this,
but I suppose these words will do for now.
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Wow this is a such a sensational piece!
I almost felt every word and image you typed, it's quiet beautifully written.
The only thing I'd have to say, is that your style in this piece seems to be a simplistic style where you don't capitalize at all, but you still keep punctuation. I think this is interesting, most of the time when I see this simplistic style of writing it's absolutely blank of punctuation and just lower case words on a page where the beat is decided by the end of the line. But I feel your use of the punctuation is also well done
Overall, wonderful piece, and the only thing I'd have to say is to put a minor mature content warning on it and you'll be good to go
Again, amazing job
I almost felt every word and image you typed, it's quiet beautifully written.
The only thing I'd have to say, is that your style in this piece seems to be a simplistic style where you don't capitalize at all, but you still keep punctuation. I think this is interesting, most of the time when I see this simplistic style of writing it's absolutely blank of punctuation and just lower case words on a page where the beat is decided by the end of the line. But I feel your use of the punctuation is also well done
Overall, wonderful piece, and the only thing I'd have to say is to put a minor mature content warning on it and you'll be good to go
Again, amazing job